Screw the big words, it's simply well written. I really want to know if he wrote it himself (note, if you didn't, we really won't hold it against you.)

It's the story of the reapers from Ma** Effect... the evil race that waits for each civilization to rise and prosper until it hits the apogee - to strike then and destroy it. Completely. Eradicate it.

(Of course, the "reaper vanguard" you're talking about, Maktok, that stood calm, "left behind to instigate their eventual return from dark space", can only be a keeper... they were the ones sending the reapers the 'get back from dark space and wipe all civilization' signal.)

if he wrote it himself it is the best ive seen him write good work maktok

Still a good choice for your character bio.

i agree. i mean i t hink that may be the actual best bio ive read ... **thats counting the fact i havent read many...